I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Tuesday, 25 June 2013

The day everything started disappearing

The day everything started disappearing

One day in a place called New Zealand there lived a family and they had a cat named Simba they really like Simba so they gave his so much toys. But one day all of his toys disappeared when Jade got home she went into her room and saw Simba crying so she went to her mum and asked  “way is Simbe crying in my room” said Jade “all of his toys disappeared”. when Tim got home he said “why is Simba crying is your room?’’  we all looked at Tim and said “all of his toy disappeared”.  Then Mum went to Jade’s room to see Simba when she  went into her room and all of her things were gone. then jade came out crying and Tim and Mum asked
“why are you crying” said Mum and Tim “because all of my things are disappeared” Then Tim went up to his room and all of his things in his room disappeared. When he came back to us he was crying and then dad came home and he said “why is Simba and Tim and Jade crying” because  “ all of their  things are things are missing” and dad said mum has got all of your thing because you always leave your things around the house”

the end     

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